Talk: Ajax-013

Archive 1 of the -013 shenanigans
Archive 2 of the -013 shenanigans

Elementary, my dear Watson?

Lordofmonsterisland — There are... no strings... on me... TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — US Central Time Zone "He can often look at an individual and derive a number small details and personality quirks to derive a short history and their next reasonable action, or even hyper-analyse an individual for a physical or mental weakness prior to conflict. " ―The Article Hmm, I believe I detect skills in the vein of Holmes here

SilvaRex — The wonderful land of Oz. TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19, 2024 Almost make him sound like he can use telepathy to read minds ^^^ O.O

Ajax 013 - <Death to Heroes>[The Damned] [The Lost][The Forgotten] ObscurumVictoria : TALK - Greenwich Mean Time I decided the 'see the world as a formulae was shit, so i made him a little bit more holmes-esque. Just a little

Lordofmonsterisland — There are... no strings... on me... TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — US Central Time Zone We must be in the "Ajax reevaluates Necros" time of year

"Aside from his incredibly strength, speed, reaction times and stamina, Ajax-013's greatest asset is his mind."

I like seeing that after we just read about the myriad of oxymoronic mental illnesses he has. Good character. -KidVegeta

"Ajax-013's greatest asset is his mind." What, you mean the one full of crippling disorders that should make him unfit for duty in the first place?

Also, seriously dude. Please, please, please get someone to check your spelling and grammar here. I know it's unfinished, but that's no excuse for poor SPaG. Hell, I'll do it if you want. Lord knows I do it for pretty much every other writer I know. --Data Junkie 02:39, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ajax 013 - <Death to Heroes>[The Damned] [The Lost][The Forgotten] ObscurumVictoria : TALK - Greenwich Mean Time You cannot fathom the amount of fuck, I do not give.

Well, I mean, the fact that you don't give a fuck about your spelling and grammar, or whether or not your character is realistic is obvious. I was just sort of hoping that if I asked, you'd let me fix the spelling and grammar, since you're obviously not going to do it. --Data Junkie 07:41, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's laughable how bad this character is. I'm just curious if you'd be willing to make him less of a Stu? -KidVegeta

oh look, it's THIS discussion again.--Den fryktedehodet 08:36, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Y'know, there's probably a good reason why that discussion keeps coming up. And I seriously doubt it has anything to do with jealousy, especially considering the fact that the article looks like it was written by a grade-schooler without spell check. Just sayin'. --Data Junkie 08:46, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Preemptively jumping in before the (figurative) shit gets (literally) real: You've made your point, Data. No need to toss petty insults around. See Rules two point two and two point four for more details. With regards. SPARTAN-118 ^{(Talk) (Contributions)} 08:52, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Never said anything about jealousy mate. Just commenting on how I've seen this before, over and over, and can guess where it's going. Same shit, different day, different users. Cheers,--Den fryktedehodet 09:38, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Maslab — I am assuming direct control.I am the harbinger of your destiny.Preserve <insert name here>'s body if possible.Releasing control. TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time) Unfortunately, Data and Vegeta, as much as I agree with you, this wiki has no real anti-Sue/Stu rules, and the article is marked under the "alternative universe" tag, which means it is technically not in breach of canon policy. That said, if you truly feel that there are grammar issues, you are allowed to correct them if you so choose. If the problem is bad enough, you can put a Grammar template up.

Actually, as I said last time this came up, I figure an "Unrealistic" tag would be more appropriate than NCF, but whatever. Also, if I don't need special permission to fix spelling and grammar errors, I'll get started on that sometime tomorrow. Well, tomorrow for me. Might be today for some folks. --Data Junkie 10:12, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

I was merely commenting on the overall lack of quality on the page. Not any of that NCF/Grammar template business. I apologize if stating an opinion about someone else's work is frowned upon. -KidVegeta

Maslab — I am assuming direct control.I am the harbinger of your destiny.Preserve <insert name here>'s body if possible.Releasing control. TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time) It is not frowned upon by any means.

Ajax 013 - <Death to Heroes>[The Damned] [The Lost][The Forgotten] ObscurumVictoria : TALK - Greenwich Mean Time 1:45 onwards EmbedVideo received the bad id "t1rYHczBMtE&t=126" for the service "youtube". That is all

Grizzlei — You Are What You Dare TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19, 2024 What are you after? You're something else. Anyhoo, 343i has the combined skills of a 13-year old fan fiction writer. I wouldn't trust everything they form into a story. :P

Maslab — Canon dispute, eh? TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time) "Spartans are humanity's next step." Note that it's the interrogator who says they're broken, while Halsey, who is established in Halo canon as possibly the smartest human to ever live, thinks that they are fixed.

Been re-reading Halo: First Strike and I can attest to the fact that it shows that SPARTAN-IIs, while collected, sometimes do haves lapses of logic because of their indoctrination. Even after the Autumn is lost, Reach is lost, and John's only allies are just three ordinary troopers, all tired from the events as Alpha Halo, he's still determined to initiate RED FLAG with just his three troopers, and takes a lot of talking out off it from both them and Cortana. John may be a great soldier, but sometimes he isn't all there. Indoctrination often clouds his judgment, so it's likely lower-tier S-IIs may have suffered from worse psychological faults. Tuckerscreator^(stalk) 05:23, February 15, 2013 (UTC)

Maslab — If you can walk, set your boots on the line. TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time) I am well aware that Spartans, who are child soldiers, are not always "all there."

Lordofmonsterisland — There are... no strings... on me... TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — US Central Time Zone On the other hand, calling Spartans the next evolution is utter BS, and having said words spoken by Halsey is BS as well, IMHO

Grizzlei — You Are What You Dare TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19, 2024 343i is full of melodramatic wordsmiths.

Maslab — Canon dispute, eh? TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time) This is true. I would say that the above conversation is just like the conversation here. A matter of opinions.