Just a word of advice: if you want to clean up those links, use the Halopedian template. For example, {{halopedian|M808B_Scorpion|M808B Scorpion}} will appear without the ugly arrow, like this: M808B Scorpion. Just remember to use underscores instead of spaces for the first input section. Cheers, —Don't make a girl a promiseif you can't keep it.
Nice work here. You've created quite a few articles pertaining to Roleath with places on the planet to link to for this article, and I think between the amount and quality of the writing and the number of images sprinkled throughout, the one thing this article needs to be nominated for a Good Article is actually less headers cutting the content up. There are some headers with only one sentence beneath them, which should either be elaborated upon or rolled into/combined with other sections. You might also add a References section towards the bottom to make the article look all fancy, and then you've got yourself another GA candidate.
I agree that this article needs (well, needed, since I've already reformatted much of it) to be reformatted. This was my first-ever attempt at a decent size article, and I hadn't quite grasped certain concepts such as paragraphs yet.